' ' ' ' Muho(No Directions) - A Tanka For Onelia Poem by Dónall Dempsey

' ' ' ' Muho(No Directions) - A Tanka For Onelia

Rating: 2.9


Statue goes for walk
moving its shadow through time
until it arrives
back to where it started from
tired now it keeps so still.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Onelia Avelar 23 June 2009

:) Very masterly written tanka, according to the rules and somehow winking at the reader passing by :) like the bizarre statue going for walk :) . Wonderful piece, moving its shadow through space until it arrives to readers mind. How did you guess, that it is right what I like! - that enigmatic images, so ghosty but although so impressive. It stuck to my mind as if it was always there :) - the walking statue moving its shadow through time.....

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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