Wednesday, September 21, 2005

Music Comments

Rating: 2.6

Music is a gift of life

To listen to music and feel the tough
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Lee John Siebritz
COMMENTS
Kim Barney 15 May 2015

The sentiments expressed here are right on, Lee John, but this poem would be so much better if you cleaned up a couple of grammar mistakes. Line three: TOO MUCH instead of TO MUCH. Line five: HAS PASSED AWAY instead of AS PASSED AWAY. Line nine: THEIR MUSIC instead of THERE MUSIC. Also, I didn't understand what you meant on line two with FEEL THE TOUGH. What is the TOUGH? Anyway, I enjoyed the poem, and congratulations on having it chosen as Poem of the Day!

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Chinedu Dike 15 May 2015

A nice piece of poetry, depicting the essence of music in our lives. A lovely poem indeed. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. ➕9

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