Music All Over Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Music All Over
Male and females
Understand
Simple
Internal voice &
Compulsion behind
Mother delights
Uncle smiles
Sister enjoys
Intelligent and beautiful brother has arrived
Curiosity now more for legal heir
Melody in air
Utility is fare
Simple joy in family
Internal wishes fulfilled
Came back the happy days
Russell Baxter14 minutes ago There is a really good meter to this poem and the rhythm just bounces the reader along nicely. The joy of the new born is evident as the reader is invited into the family circle for these few lines of happiness… Comment +1 great.
Summerlynn Lewis14 minutes ago I like the way it flows together and makes a great piece. Good job. Comment +1 I'd call it open association but I didn't like it and you know by now I am not who's important here.
Gary Nichols16 minutes ago Keep the audience in mind and keep sharing. You made me wonder about your content
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I would like to translate this poem
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sweet Shakil Ahmed Baliyavi16 minutes ago good poem Comment +1 Nicely penned