Thursday, June 30, 2011

Musing Knotted Comments

Rating: 5.0

we are as a bundle of chords on the floor, each decision we make
is the hand that plucks us and plugs us into what we do.

through the myriad of decisions we make each day,
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Maxwell Ames
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 30 June 2011

Good poem. Vivid imagery and remarkable style. I loved the way you composed the poem. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'A humble complaint.' on page 2. Regards Akmal

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