Spirit Litter


My All - Poem by Spirit Litter

It's too bad to feel something so right
but have it to be completely out of sight.

Nothing is harder then to give your heart a song
and have everything go wrong.

Just when you think it's all great
something comes inside, and quakes.

This kind of life seems to give nothing worth saving
but when it's night, everything gone quiet,
and you're sitting all alone-
You are the who- who'll give me light.
That's when it feels right.
That's when my heart's song sings into my whole.
That's when I melt.
But you're always out of sight,
only making this seem unreal.

Too bad for the downfall,
because inside of me
you are my all.


Comments about My All by Spirit Litter

  • (4/27/2008 11:56:00 AM)


    heartfelt, strong emotions. i identified with this. (Report) Reply

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  • (4/23/2008 11:16:00 AM)


    I really like this poem mam thanks. (Report) Reply

  • (4/15/2008 1:36:00 PM)


    I really enjoyed this poem. (Report) Reply

  • (4/12/2008 11:26:00 AM)


    I really do like this poem, it stands it's own ground
    good structure! !

    All the best

    J.L
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  • (4/12/2008 3:09:00 AM)


    really great....a rhyming poem (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 7, 2008



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