My Bad Poem by Alex Romanowski

My Bad

Rating: 2.9


I decided to write you a poem,
I thought hard of what to say.
Lately's been a little bit messed up,
At times i've considered going....

I never meant to hurt you,
It kills me to see you sad.
I've been stupid, hurtful, and inconsiderate too,
All I can think to say is, my bad.

I wish we could start this over,
I wish you'd give me another try.
You see, I really want to be your friend,
If you want, i'll attempt to cry?

I think the poems over now,
I have nothing left to say.
Other then please, I beg you, don't be mad,
I wanted you to know, it was my bad.

Sunday, June 15, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Estrella Baldemosa 15 June 2008

welcome...good penning. being yourself is not bad...

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Greenwolfe 1962 15 June 2008

I don't know if this is your first poem or not. If it is, you have genuine poetry skill. The construction, of course, has flaws. But the structure is flawless. Most have great difficulty with that, because they have no poetic instincts. These you have.Thanks and good luck. GW62

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&&angel4ever && 15 June 2008

great one i felt pain regret i hope ur pain go away

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