My Betty Poem by David Smart

My Betty

Rating: 4.3


My Betty

When my Betty comes out to play
Running along with her happy face,
She seems to brighten the dullest day
Dressed in her ribbons, bows and lace.

When my Betty comes out to play
Though I am sad and about to cry
Her laughter drives my cares away,
She's beautiful as a butterfly.

When my Betty comes out to play
Dancing and prancing and leaping high
With her colourful ribbons fluttering gay
Skipping and tripping - my butterfly.

When my Betty comes out to play
I see her mother at every turn.
I remember her smile on that last day.
She left me with such a lot to learn.

When my Betty comes out to play
My love for her near fills my heart.
Except for the bit that's locked away,
The bit that is her mother's part.

Saturday, December 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: loss,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I started this intending it ti be about two playmates but after the first verse it sounded a little suspect so I let it go where it wanted to.I was surprised at the way it developed.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abhimanyu Kumar.s 09 December 2017

So sweet picture of affection. Great job

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 December 2017

A great write full of delight....though poignant at the end..10

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David Smart

David Smart

Warwickshire, England
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