Tuesday, April 21, 2009

My Big Sister Comments

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I really look up to Brandie Baker
She actually has a life
She has friends
She has friends that care
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Darrian Asbury
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Brandie ......... 01 May 2009

See i like this one and not only because it is about me. You have added more words to your poem that is what you should do to strengthen other poems.

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