Abdulaziz Mohy

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My Confession (Pt.1) - Poem by Abdulaziz Mohy

I can no longer keep
What lies hidden deep
For my body is aching all the time
And nightmares haunt me in my sleep
I can no longer carry the burden
Of my sinful deed

Here I lay my fate into your hands and kneel
Here I start my confession
Hoping that confessing my horrible deed
Will ease my depression
Hoping that when the day is done
I won't be regretting


Comments about My Confession (Pt.1) by Abdulaziz Mohy

  • Vinod KumarVinod Kumar (10/22/2011 11:19:00 PM)

    very Nice feel of a real confession keep it up good attempt.. (Report)Reply

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  • Adya Niraj (10/11/2011 7:18:00 AM)

    Very beautifully written...I rate it 10. (Report)Reply

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  • Anele The_african_son Potelwa (umbhali_wasembo) (10/8/2011 10:51:00 AM)

    Wonderful My Good Sir, And To The Inspiration I Got From The Above Poem, Made me want to confess to someone, Well Done! Keep Moving Mate, Ill see myself to more of your poems. (Report)Reply

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  • Malaya RosesMalaya Roses (10/8/2011 7:36:00 AM)

    Life and love might be going to the same point that crucial: self-realization and repent..! !

    Intense poem of of regret and huge hope for an absolute forgiveness.... WELL DONE! ! ! !

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  • Aqeb BenazirAqeb Benazir (10/7/2011 7:15:00 AM)

    it's one of those pieces where you need to read and read to sink in. well thought provoking indeed. (Report)Reply

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  • Luz HanaiiLuz Hanaii (10/6/2011 1:39:00 PM)

    Very heartfelt write. I felt each word you wrote from your heart. If this is a true write, maybe talking to a professional can help or if you believe in God, repenting and talking
    directly to Him in prayer.

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 5, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 6, 2011

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