Wednesday, October 5, 2011

My Confession (Pt.1) Comments

Rating: 5.0

I can no longer keep
What lies hidden deep
For my body is aching all the time
And nightmares haunt me in my sleep
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Abdulaziz Mohy
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Vinod Kumar 22 October 2011

very Nice feel of a real confession keep it up good attempt..

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Adya Niraj 11 October 2011

Very beautifully written...I rate it 10.

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Wonderful My Good Sir, And To The Inspiration I Got From The Above Poem, Made me want to confess to someone, Well Done! Keep Moving Mate, Ill see myself to more of your poems.

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Malaya Roses 08 October 2011

Life and love might be going to the same point that crucial: self-realization and repent..! ! Intense poem of of regret and huge hope for an absolute forgiveness.... WELL DONE! ! ! !

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Aqeb Benazir 07 October 2011

it's one of those pieces where you need to read and read to sink in. well thought provoking indeed.

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Luz Hanaii 06 October 2011

Very heartfelt write. I felt each word you wrote from your heart. If this is a true write, maybe talking to a professional can help or if you believe in God, repenting and talking directly to Him in prayer.

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