Safiyyah Manjra

My Creation - Poem by Safiyyah Manjra

Torn between worlds,
Shattered between decisions,
To find a life longing profession.

Sometimes we all can wish to escape the dreadful moments of reality.
Not only can it be haunting discretely.

The excessive thoughts are a mess,
In a white coat flesh.

I long for an answer,
For which I can't seem to gather.

Maybe I need another along the way.
Maybe I need decisions which will stay.

I am torn between worlds.
Torn between worlds.

Worlds which I created.
A world of which I am now afraid.

Topic(s) of this poem: creativity, decisions, thoughts, world

Comments about My Creation by Safiyyah Manjra

  • (6/20/2018 10:07:00 AM)

    Hi Safiyyah,
    Very profound thoughts. Beautifully worded. Good poem.

    : : World I have created
    : : A world of which I an now afraid... wonderful lines...100

    (6/20/2018 9:45:00 PM)

    Hi E.S, Thank you, you have 100 worthy eyes.

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  • Bernard F. Asuncion (6/20/2018 12:39:00 AM)

    Safiyyah, such a well penned poem....10++++++ (Report)Reply

    (6/20/2018 9:46:00 PM)

    much appreciated, thank you 10 10 10

    (6/20/2018 9:46:00 PM)

    Thank you Mr. Asuncion

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  • Robert Murray Smith (6/20/2018 12:25:00 AM)

    We do create our own worlds. Those imprisoned by religion have little free will.++10 (Report)Reply

    (6/20/2018 9:50:00 PM)

    imprisoned? haha, no Sir Smith, Just the thin membrane which serves as a protection. At the end of the day we make our own decisions because we live our own lives. Imprisonment is nothing but a mere construct, don't conceive it and you'll be free, pretty simple actually.

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 19, 2018

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