My Creation Poem by Safiyyah Manjra

My Creation

Rating: 5.0


Torn between worlds,
Shattered between decisions,
To find a life longing profession.

Sometimes we all can wish to escape the dreadful moments of reality.
Not only can it be haunting discretely.

The excessive thoughts are a mess,
In a white coat flesh.

I long for an answer,
For which I can't seem to gather.

Maybe I need another along the way.
Maybe I need decisions which will stay.

I am torn between worlds.
Worlds.
Torn between worlds.

Worlds which I created.
A world of which I am now afraid.

Tuesday, June 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: creativity,decisions,thoughts,world
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 31 May 2022

Insightful and profound piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Safiyyah Manjra 02 June 2022

You are most welcomed, happy reading!

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Unnikrishnan E S 20 June 2018

Hi Safiyyah, Very profound thoughts. Beautifully worded. Good poem. : : World I have created : : A world of which I an now afraid... wonderful lines...100

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Safiyyah Manjra 20 June 2018

Hi E.S, Thank you, you have 100 worthy eyes.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 June 2018

Safiyyah, such a well penned poem....10++++++

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Safiyyah Manjra 20 June 2018

much appreciated, thank you 10 10 10

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Safiyyah Manjra 20 June 2018

Thank you Mr. Asuncion

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Robert Murray Smith 20 June 2018

We do create our own worlds. Those imprisoned by religion have little free will.++10

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Safiyyah Manjra 20 June 2018

imprisoned? haha, no Sir Smith, Just the thin membrane which serves as a protection. At the end of the day we make our own decisions because we live our own lives. Imprisonment is nothing but a mere construct, don't conceive it and you'll be free, pretty simple actually.

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