You say it was an accident
And now its too late
But baby, for me it was real
An enchanted fate.....
When I looked into your eyes, I saw heaven
When I kissed your soft lips, I went on cloud seven
When you were in my arms, I knew I was complete
I longed to love you, everytime we got to meet.....
You held my hands when I was weak
You spoke for me when i couldn't speak
You were my eyes when I couldn't see
Your love broke all the chains, setting me free.....
Whenever i got hurt, you bled
You understood my feelings, while others fled
All the miseries and pain couldn't keep us apart
Because baby your name was etched on my heart......
But now I wonder what went wrong?
I long for those days, far are they gone?
I long for your eyes, the heaven I saw in them
I long for your gentle kiss, wish they were the same.....
There is no one to hold my hands
There is no one to speak for me
Without you my vision is blurred
Without your sparkling eyes,
nd serenity in thee.....
And now when I look back into past
The flashback starts and the time rolls slow
Sometimes situation is under our control
And sometimes we have to let things go....
Somnath, you have made a very good beginning. Your maiden poem about the maiden in the poem is truly enchanting, well begun half done. Expect more.Narayanan.
its more of a song than a poem. gud one though. keep going!
It is a very good poem Somnath, cudn't is spelled couldn't, and cos is spelled cause, but because is better. It sounds like you are very talented, keep up the good work.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Your poem is a love poem and I like it, because of the words and expression. Your thoughts have dominated your spelling, I think, due to be hurry in writing. Anyhow, the poem is nice to read.