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My Cruel Princess

Rating: 5.0

You say it was an accident
And now its too late
But baby, for me it was real
An enchanted fate.....

When I looked into your eyes, I saw heaven
When I kissed your soft lips, I went on cloud seven
When you were in my arms, I knew I was complete
I longed to love you, everytime we got to meet.....

You held my hands when I was weak
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Mohammad Muzzammil 17 March 2011

Your poem is a love poem and I like it, because of the words and expression. Your thoughts have dominated your spelling, I think, due to be hurry in writing. Anyhow, the poem is nice to read.

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Somnath, you have made a very good beginning. Your maiden poem about the maiden in the poem is truly enchanting, well begun half done. Expect more.Narayanan.

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Rekha Mandagere 17 March 2011

Good attempt. Keep writing more.

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The Ashraf Sheikh 17 March 2011

its more of a song than a poem. gud one though. keep going!

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Juan Olivarez 16 March 2011

It is a very good poem Somnath, cudn't is spelled couldn't, and cos is spelled cause, but because is better. It sounds like you are very talented, keep up the good work.

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