My Cryptic Love Poem by Rahul Singh Rana

My Cryptic Love

Rating: 4.8


I fell in love
A kind never heard before.
I fell in love
A kind unsaid yet.

Darkness was my love
And i fell in love.
Shadows when created
Defy the truth.
My 'other' part 'emerging'
Felt only by
'My darkness.'
I had no choice
But,
To fall in love.

All my tears remain hidden
In darkness alone.
Nobody sees them
No hand has so much power
So as to wipe them.
But,
My companion
'My darkness'
Hides them all.

Myself being conquered
Went away from
The light of thy truth.
Darkness took over
And promised a
Never ending 'love.'
And so i fell in love.

Myself was always
Incomplete
Thy presence did
'My darkness' complete.
And so,
My love for life
Did 'thy' darkness complete.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brishti Mazumdar 08 June 2009

Thy presence did 'My darkness' complete. And so, My love for life Did 'thy' darkness complete. What an unusual way of thinking...10 for that...Brishti Mazumdar

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Alok Agarwal 03 June 2009

what a splendid description of other side of love.....amazing.....good work

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Maitreyee Joshi 02 June 2009

a cryptic love expressed as true as the darkness.your poem has a mysterious feel of the darkness.

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Kranthi Pothineni 28 May 2009

Very expressive poem. Nicely penned.

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Reshma Ramesh 27 May 2009

a diifferent read...........well penned

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Surya . 02 October 2009

an amazing and beautiful poem voted10 surya

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Surya . 02 October 2009

an amazing and beautiful poem voted10 surya

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Surya . 02 October 2009

an amazing and beautiful poem voted10 surya

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Surya . 02 October 2009

an amazing and beautiful poem voted10 surya

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Brishti Mazumdar 08 June 2009

Thy presence did 'My darkness' complete. And so, My love for life Did 'thy' darkness complete. What an unusual way of thinking...10 for that...Brishti Mazumdar

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