Wednesday, November 28, 2007

My Dad Hurt Me Comments

Rating: 4.7

every step towards the door
made leaving hurt so much more
i took one step and then another
we had to be there for each other
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Roseann Shawiak 01 April 2015

Such depths of feelings in this poem, heart wrenching, with an underlying anger. Such strength within having survived this horrendous experience. Can't even imagine, keep writing and sharing this anguish, maybe it will help to heal. Very brave you are to write about it! Thank you, RoseAnn

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Bill Thomas 16 July 2008

Horrendous experience, Angel, but what resilience in your depths to bring such a well-crafted poem out of it & therefore win! ! ! Keep writing, keep fighting, keep loving - you have a great gift here. Thank you.

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Kathrine Stokan 01 May 2008

wonderful poem. its sad but deep. and its experiences like these that keep people going :)

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Lissa Tanksley 06 March 2008

i really think you have a deep mind, soul and spirit.your thoughts and veiws of life are specific and through this poem i almost can picture myself where you r.i love the poem keep writing

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Suicide King 11 December 2007

Through our anguish we write our best poetry...its sad but true

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Sterenig Lc 28 November 2007

My eyes went upon the title of your poem on the home page. English is not my first language, so I don't pretend I understood everything. But I heard pain and suffering beneath your words. Your pen name made me shiver. Be assured that there are people around you, maybe you just don't see them for the moment, that care for you and can help you. I don't know you, but your poem made me care for you. S.

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