Saturday, September 12, 2015

My Dad, My Superman Comments

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Hair black as coal, eyes as blue as the sky.
You held me high, like a bird in the sky.
When the world was against me, you were there.
You protected me.
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Martin Strain
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Chinedu Dike 15 September 2015

Beautiful tribute in remembrance and celebration of a father who was a loving dad, well articulated and subtly penned from inner recesses of the heart. A lovely poem nicely written with conviction. Thanks for sharing Martin. Please read my poem THE OBSESSIVE AGONY OF LUST.

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Miraj Raha 12 September 2015

a brilliant dedication to everyone's favorite person.

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Martin Strain 13 September 2015

I appreciate it, thank you!

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Seema Jayaraman 12 September 2015

Beautifully captured..your feelings for your Dad

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Martin Strain 12 September 2015

Thank you, I appreciate it!

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