Jessel Jane Tevar Toring


My Death - Poem by Jessel Jane Tevar Toring

You were my happiness,
but now my misery.
My truth, but now- lies;
my only dream
that turned into a nightmare;
my smile but now my tears;
my joy but now my agony;
my blessing but now my curse;
my source of love,
but now- hatred;
My only need,
but now- unwanted.
You were my life...
but now my death.


Comments about My Death by Jessel Jane Tevar Toring

  • (2/4/2008 6:34:00 PM)

    I agree w/ Ivan Donn Carswell. You're writing is really unique. I love your writing and so do a whole lot of my friends [Not on Poemhunter but my friends were over at my house and I showed them ur poems. They luved em too! ! ! ! ]
    luvs!
    Skye<3 xx
    Keep up the good work!
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  • (1/23/2008 10:52:00 PM)

    Jane, I have just read thru all your poems. You have a developing talent which I will watch with keen interest. I hope you continue to write - your style is both unique and very good! Rgds, Ivan (Report)Reply

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  • (1/17/2008 8:00:00 PM)

    There is no need to feel so miserable! Let us face the life boldly and learn to reconcile to the realities of life which provides greater peace! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 17, 2008



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