My Dream Poem by Asif Baloch

My Dream

Rating: 5.0


I think of one thing
only one thing I think
will I ever fall in love
or the thirst will remain
in my heart

I feel like a desert
carving for water
the rain of love will
ever fill my throat

Ah! I dont know
dont know for sure
this thirst for love will
ever be fulfilled

Soon I'll die with
the thirst inside me
and no one will be here
to fulfill my dream

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 17 September 2008

'Soon I'll die with the thirst inside me and no one will be here to fulfill my dream' Strongly I disagree with the last lines, and 10++

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Kesav Easwaran 02 July 2008

may your thirst for love be satiated soon...

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Donai Raouf 21 June 2008

i liked it ..pleasant

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