My Fantasy Poem by Trenton watson
My Fantasy
My fantasy,
It longs to be real,
To be satisfiying,
It holds me in place,
Shakes my fears out of my mind,
Darkness rolls around my feet,
How i love it so,
My fantasy to fly,
Among the trees,
To glide across the water,
To sing in the lovelyest places,
My fantasy to be with her,
The most beautifulest girl in the world,
She swims in my mind like a fish in water,
Yet she is not enough for me,
I long to be with her for the rest of my life,
To hold her hand on a warm summer day,
To walk along the shore on a sunny beach,
To kiss her on the highest mountain,
My fantasy for her dad,
To not think of me as he wishes,
To not hate me for who I am,
To let us be together,
My fantasy,
To lubb her!
(I loved writen this about my love T&S foever!)
the element of fantasy is so well depicted through emotive and resonant images... that softens every heart.
The 'fantasy' that the poet professes indicates that his notion of love, the overpowering feelings and emotions which have inspired his expression are intricately linked with the images of beauty that he finds in nature. The comparisons with elements of nature conjure a sense of the 'classical romanticism', yet the flow of the inner voice indicates that 'she' the love he yearns for alone is not enough. The love the poet wishes to express to his love and experince himself is placed in the context of a wide variety of experiences that he fantasises of. Goes to assert that love does not take place in a vacumm. It is the world which he dreams of that has enhanced her beauty and her beauty inturn does make the world he dreams of a fantastical place of incomparable beauty.
Its such a sweet and highly expressive poem! Spoken wonderfully from the heart! Excellent job!
Sweet! She's a lucky girl Trenton, your heart is in a wonderful creative place to write from.... nice poem buddy. As for her father... maybe one day he will see a little more than your shadow.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 3:02:04 AM # 1.0.0.1119
lovely i like it, , keep up the good writings