James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Tuesday, November 3, 2009

My Fantasy Comments

Rating: 5.0

Asleep I wake, I'm not alone.
I hear a windows, silent breeze.
Deep inside the woods tonight.
I feel long shadows, of that tree.
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Rachel Butler 04 November 2009

'I feel long shadows, of that tree' Rachel Ann Butler

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 04 November 2009

Liked the verse full of observation, imagination and expectation. Nice cute poem.

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Original Unknown Girl 04 November 2009

Beautiful imagery in so few words. HG: -) xx

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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