Tuesday, November 13, 2012

My First Cig Puff Comments

Rating: 5.0

Holding that slender stick in between two fingers
Stance of an emperor of a classy empire
The curvy wavy smoke in air lingers
One cig in hand smartens your attire
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Neha Godambe
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Utsav Patel 24 November 2012

Ya i ll pray... Its wonderful...

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Ratnakar Mandlik 14 November 2012

Best description of the first experience with a cig and it reminded me similar moments I went through before 4 decades. Great write.10+++. Keep it up.

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Neha Godambe

Neha Godambe

Mumbai, India
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