My Four Elements Poem by Jacob Chumo

My Four Elements

Rating: 5.0


I am who I am,
My spirit burn like the eternal fire,
My mind free like the air I breathe,
My soul fluid like the water I drink,
My body steady like mother earth,
I am who I am.

Tuesday, April 10, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: elements,fire,water
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this is my interpretation of the four elements in relation to the human self
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 February 2019

A brilliant interpretation of the four elements in relation to the human self. So succinct yet profound.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 21 February 2019

Jacob, this is such a nice poem. I liked the interpretation of the four elements. Yes, so true! " I am who i am" ......... A full vote for you Jacob!

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