My Gift... Poem by I wish i was as invisable as he made me feel

My Gift...

Rating: 5.0


For you whose hearts been broken,
by one you thought you knew,
these simple words so carefully picked,
i dedicate to you.

It seems that when you fall in love,
your worries fade away,
and problems you had yesterday,
don't bother you today...

You think the world is at your feet,
and good times never end,
alone at home or in a crowd,
you've always got a friend...

The fights you have from time to time,
spill tears of rage and apin,
but then there comes the fun,
of making up again...

You share your joys and fears of life,
and lay your feelings bare,
the things you did alone before,
are now twice as fun to share...

But some things just seem to change,
the magic disappears,
thoses sad songs that felt good before,
now fill your eyes with tears...

It seems so wrong that lif goes on,
when now for you it's stopped,
you've nothing left in all this world,
when once you had alot...

So many times you ask yourslef,
what turned the good times bad?
but deep down all that matters is,
you lost the one love you had...

Please don't be hurt by shattered dreams,
it's hard but keep your head,
as young hearts can make the sweetest plans,
but get sadly so misled...: (

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anita Blake 30 October 2007

AMAZING write i really liked this one thanks for sharing! ! !

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Brian Mills 29 October 2007

a true masterpiece you have constructed here! ! ! loved it! ! hands down a ten! ! ! what a beautiful write! ! ! thnx again dear friend! ! Brian~

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