Monday, January 14, 2008

My Gratitute For Your Virtue (Sonnet) Comments

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I would be standing alone with a plea
Like a frail structure in solitude,
If had not you helped me so nicely.
My heart is filled with humble gratitude.
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Greenwolfe 1962 11 June 2008

I don't want to be too critical but the reading of this is very difficult. Some of the words don't match. The sentiment is lovely, its almost as if there is something lost in a translation. Greenwolfe 1962

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Vidyadhar ... 10 February 2008

Good one depicting the deep emotions

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Jyoti Sunit Chaudhary

Jyoti Sunit Chaudhary

Madhubani, Bihar, India
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