My Heart Poem by Ali Hasan

My Heart

Rating: 4.7


Their was a day she chiseled my heart away;
It turned to dust and scattered away till this day;
It rides the breeze threw the flowers and trees;
Maybe one day, She will decide to gather it all and turn it to clay;
She’ll shape a heart and keep it until we meet someday;
Till then I’ll sit here and bleed my life away…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rain Storm 23 May 2006

I really like this poem, very nice..

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Dustin Bennefield 23 May 2006

well a repitition of words but well put

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Donny S 20 May 2006

Hey Ali, this is a really good poem! You've tugged all the heartstrings of a good romance poem (10/10 from me!) Keep up the good work........ ~Dona~

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Ali Hasan

Claremont, Ca
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