(In TANKA syllable count is 5-7-5-7-7 (3 Tankas)
1) I bought a pen named
Friendship to write an essay
On you, feelings choked
Till I gave up, and I met
You, god smiled at me my dear.
2) Daffodils dances if
I meet you everyday, from
Depths of the ocean,
Heights of the Everest, I
Love you with my heart and soul
3) For you my heart beats
Letters A-Z When I miss
MANAS, I bought a
Diamond, I compared it with
You, it burst like dynamite!
Thanks to Shazia Batool, Heather Wilkins, Abdul Wahab ji for their insightful comments.
this is very fine Harindhar, nicely penned..your new attempt...lovely enjoyed especially the first one!
Hyperbolic images are blended with passion, rather than being highlighted as an extra thing...form and theme both well worked out! ! !
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I would like to translate this poem
Wow. Wonderful write..Just loved reading them all.
Thank you for a wonderful review on the poem ππππ