poet Hasmukh Amathalal

Hasmukh Amathalal

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My Intentions

I reassured her of my intentions
They were all real and for retention
I barely exposed it with clear mention
She must oppose and raise the questions

Sit under tree if that provides shed
Offers fruits and clearly lead
I may be only thin thread
As love is not business or trade

"I love your wisdom" she said
But I need freedom
Freedom of movement with no limit
She was assertive with remarks and said "where do I fit?

I want no back baiters and cheaters
I would rather love haters
But in no way cowards! who fall back
"Desert in between to claim no stake" she was aggressive

"I touch the heart and speak words"
She was now swimming with eyes straightward
I felt as if sky had descended on earth
Missed every beat and took heavy breath

I was speechless with her frank utterances
She had made road at once
It was not by fluke or chance
I felt warmth in her presence

I was closing on her with good start
I always believed it as simple but decisive art
It depends on how best you can make friends
Stick to it and hold on till the end

She was now within permissible distance
I felt her heavy breath in acceptance
"Take me to your embrace and enlighten"
She was their for this occasion all of sudden

I couldn't believe eyes
She was there for me with all these trials
I knell down on earth and prayed for great reward
She was there all for me to accept and look forward

Take me all along where ever you go
She was standing with closed eyes and ready to forgo
All my past efforts with forget and forgive style
I was dreaming day time and wondering meanwhile

(To be continued)

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 21, 2012

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Comments about My Intentions by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/22/2012 10:46:00 AM)

    A PROMISE IS A PROMISE, SHE WILL ALWAYS BE AT YOUR SIDE AND SUPPORT YOU IN YOUR PATH!

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  • Apphia GrimoniaApphia Grimonia (3/22/2012 1:17:00 AM)

    i guess you really put your feeling in your poem...it's great...

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  • Doll Hardcore (3/21/2012 10:31:00 PM)

    This is a very great write! ((:

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/21/2012 9:59:00 AM)

    I reassured her of my intentions
    They were all real and for retention

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