Lei Blade

Rookie - 25 Points (23rd May1990 / Udaipur)

My Jove - Poem by Lei Blade

You are my god, as you don't have emotions,
You are rather cold.
And I, your worshipper, die, cry, to be in your blissfull shadow.
Please, be with me and make it history.

I don't want to bear another Perseus,
I don't want him to criticize you,
Please love me, be with me,
Don't go, be warm with emotions,
And you will, in turn create history,
And the dumb people will discord God's realm,
Hence, making you the one.

You will be my love and the love of the world,
Just by being with me and my son,
We love you, both of us and uncomparable,
The whole world will too,
We have it for you, just for you.


Comments about My Jove by Lei Blade

  • Ramesh Rai (8/24/2012 7:00:00 AM)


    My frnd. a great write. A person without emotion and feeling can never create poem. you are at tender age and enough time to create more and more poems. never stop writing. keep it up then one day you will be able to realise what poetry is? In my opinion, it is above all. top marks. (Report) Reply

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  • (8/24/2012 5:39:00 AM)


    Good work, like this, worshipper might be the better spelling. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 24, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, August 25, 2012


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