My Jove Poem by Lei Blade

My Jove

Rating: 5.0


You are my god, as you don't have emotions,
You are rather cold.
And I, your worshipper, die, cry, to be in your blissfull shadow.
Please, be with me and make it history.

I don't want to bear another Perseus,
I don't want him to criticize you,
Please love me, be with me,
Don't go, be warm with emotions,
And you will, in turn create history,
And the dumb people will discord God's realm,
Hence, making you the one.

You will be my love and the love of the world,
Just by being with me and my son,
We love you, both of us and uncomparable,
The whole world will too,
We have it for you, just for you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 24 August 2012

My frnd. a great write. A person without emotion and feeling can never create poem. you are at tender age and enough time to create more and more poems. never stop writing. keep it up then one day you will be able to realise what poetry is? In my opinion, it is above all. top marks.

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Leslie Philibert 24 August 2012

Good work, like this, worshipper might be the better spelling.

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