My Killer Poem by Gordon D Wilkinson

My Killer

Rating: 5.0


Pencil thin, perfectly formed
Skin of alabaster white
Wearing your fancy collar tight
Restricting
Warming my intakes of breath
Soothing yet so dangerous
I am addicted to you
Flirting with the danger
As you touch my lips, I am lost
I cannot be without your touch
The taste of you is my one delight
Yet you destroy me inside
My one vice so deadly
Cigarette my killer

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynda Robson 18 March 2009

An excellent write, I think you have summed up how smokers have a love/hate relationship with their cigarettes. Luckily I managed to give up seven years ago, Lynda xx 10

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Bonnie Collins 17 March 2009

This is VERY VERY good....

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Zarabeth Pawlowski 17 March 2009

Love it but hate it. Its like your talking to a lover. But you hate them and love them at the same time

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