I can see but am not there
Here so close to the suns glare
Deep in the mists of the galaxy
Weightless to infinity
Just a thought roaming about far
Bouncing from star to star
Alighting here and there
Infiltrating with care
Then blown back onto the winds hand
Travelling from land to land
Just a thought
Coming to nought
A thought
Really good poem. Great imagery and tone. I'd give this a 10.
Love this, feels like daydreaming.........my favourite state. alana
Hi Gord This is one of your best ever poems. I like the imagery and the mysticism within it. It seems that 'Love Poems', are not the only area in which your talent blossoms.. Steve
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
But sometimes coming to much! Great metaphors Gordon. Mark