Tuesday, July 17, 2012

My Letter To God Comments

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When I look up at the sky on a stormy night
I do not see stars
Yet I know they are there
They remind me that the night is not so dark
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Michael Silver
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Bri Edwards 15 January 2013

not to rock the boat, but..........i did well believing in God before college and am doing at least as well not believing in God after college. of course i may go to Hell! ! Hell, it's not my fault i don't believe anymore. but i am open-minded; any of you believers are welcome to try to ATTEMPT to convert me with poems or prose..........just don't be pests, please. as for this poem? yes, i guess it is as much a poem as some of mine are. let's not be picky. i would more likely call it a letter (as in the title) or a prayer. i do miss seeing some capital letters other than at first words of lines and Jehovah, and some punctuation, BUT, hey! , it is not MY poem. thanks for sharing...the poet, Michael, and the comment-makers. bri

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Tatiana Guerrier 15 August 2012

Beautiful and thank you for using his name :) Keep writing!

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Walterrean Salley 01 August 2012

Enjoyed this beautiful letter. I'm sure that God did too. And I believe that He is there for you always. The best to you.

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