My Life Comments

I agree you are right nice reading

This is heartfelt and the theme is so finely woven in your lines.Like fresh water. I agree with you but we also live for some cherished days though they mean nothing to us but for others they are so much more. In the end there is a blank wall again. I would prefer a date on mocha today.10

A rich message..........lines written in a passionate way.......yah life s nt hw rich we are or how happy we are..........a true life is how good we are.........n how happy we make others......10+++ sebastine

then wat's it about..? ?

Ohhhhhh It's sooo Sweet and well composed Love the lesson in it... Well done

Nicely composed, enjoyed this.

It would have been most apt A line in addition, you would have written As to what life is after all All of us have the same thought about life... Its not 'this and 'that' then what? ? Nicely written. Thanks...