Friday, May 5, 2023

My Life In Words Comments

Rating: 5.0

I write poetry to please
All whom may care to read,
I say it as it is,
No holding back,
...
Read full text

Jayne Louise Davies
COMMENTS
D.N. Rebb 05 May 2023

I love your poem just the way it is. As you write straight from the heart

0 0 Reply
Ricky M 05 May 2023

Last para: forever and a day is confusing, consider: Poetry has always and will always make me happy. To share with you today, it is my life in words.

0 0 Reply

Any relation to Bri maybe? Lol. I don't rack my brain to figure out how my verses fit better. I say it as it is. But thanks for your advice anyway : )

0 0
Ricky M 05 May 2023

line 8- 13 consider: It will always be there for me, just like a wild flower or a lovely tree. Arms open wide to welcome my thoughts, always by my side.

0 0 Reply
Ricky M 05 May 2023

First 5 lines should be: I write poetry to appeal to everyone who might be interested in reading it. I am honest and don't hold back.

0 0 Reply
Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
Close
Error Success