I write poetry to please
All whom may care to read,
I say it as it is,
No holding back,
I write straight from the heart,
Willing to part with my emotions,
For poetry is a pure devotion.
Forever by my side,
Welcoming my thoughts
With arms open wide.
It will always be there for me,
Like a wild flower,
Or a fine tree,
That blows in the breeze.
Poetry,
Brings out the glow in me,
Forever and a day.
It's my life in words,
To share with you today.
Jayne Louise Davies
Last para: forever and a day is confusing, consider: Poetry has always and will always make me happy. To share with you today, it is my life in words.
Any relation to Bri maybe? Lol. I don't rack my brain to figure out how my verses fit better. I say it as it is. But thanks for your advice anyway : )
line 8- 13 consider: It will always be there for me, just like a wild flower or a lovely tree. Arms open wide to welcome my thoughts, always by my side.
First 5 lines should be: I write poetry to appeal to everyone who might be interested in reading it. I am honest and don't hold back.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I love your poem just the way it is. As you write straight from the heart