My Memories Are Faded Dreams Poem by Rafia Jones

My Memories Are Faded Dreams

Rating: 5.0


Without you im nothing
Nothing is left
Left all alone
Alone till my last breath
Breath of freedom
Freedom of my mind
Mind you don’t forget
Forget who I was
Was it true
True that you knew
Knew what I felt
Felt all my pain
Pains me to think
Think you could ever understand
Understand why I’m leaving
Leaving to the only better place
Place your hands in mine
Mine are the memories
Memories we shared
Shared all our secrets
Secrets of all we knew
Knew that this would be hard
Hard are goodbyes
Goodbyes to the ones you love
Love has to break
Break apart in the end
End is near
Near to my end.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Salir Airosa 09 September 2006

This is a very good poem, when I read your forum post I was expecting something so-so. I admire how you used a new form and style and used it so well.10!

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Melvina Germain 05 September 2006

Very nice Rafia, I like this very much, another (10) of course---Melvina

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Kee Thampi 31 August 2006

Goodbyes to the ones you love Love has to break Break apart in the end End is near Near to my end. this poem makes us to relax, we wish you may live long with our prayer is for you, like a new rose, rosy to dream and strength

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Steve Hagget 31 August 2006

Clever and holds together well - I like this Rafia, steve

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