My Moment Of Death Poem by The Devil From Hell

My Moment Of Death



One day I died
And found true peace
Where all violence
Doth do cease

The air is fresh
The waters clean
It truly is
A pretty scene

Humans and animals
Live as one
Both quite happy
When the day is done

This after life
Has people that care
They all are quite kind
They all love to share

The trees are quite tall
And have lots of leaves
The flowers are sweet
And have lots of bees

The suns always shining
The skies always blue
Theres lots of fun games
And puzzles to do

This place is so nice
It cannot be real
For the sights are extreme
Like thoughts you can feel

You may not quite
Get it right now
But when you die
I'll show you how

Paradise
Is a name for this place
It has such beauty
And it has such grace

I love where I am
And i'd love to stay
But the nurses are sadly
Pulling me away

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Tht sounds a lot like the way i 1st saw it but it was my friend did he not realize thts were i wanted to b

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Raymond Rivera 15 March 2010

This is what I'm talking about. A very, very well written poem. I loved this one. Let's hope this paradise does exist. 9/10 You got the rhyming thing down.

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Johnny Khalil 15 March 2010

this poem is so fascinating and it is so true it is paradise

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