One day I died
And found true peace
Where all violence
Doth do cease
The air is fresh
The waters clean
It truly is
A pretty scene
Humans and animals
Live as one
Both quite happy
When the day is done
This after life
Has people that care
They all are quite kind
They all love to share
The trees are quite tall
And have lots of leaves
The flowers are sweet
And have lots of bees
The suns always shining
The skies always blue
Theres lots of fun games
And puzzles to do
This place is so nice
It cannot be real
For the sights are extreme
Like thoughts you can feel
You may not quite
Get it right now
But when you die
I'll show you how
Paradise
Is a name for this place
It has such beauty
And it has such grace
I love where I am
And i'd love to stay
But the nurses are sadly
Pulling me away
This is what I'm talking about. A very, very well written poem. I loved this one. Let's hope this paradise does exist. 9/10 You got the rhyming thing down.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Tht sounds a lot like the way i 1st saw it but it was my friend did he not realize thts were i wanted to b