My Place Poem by wabi sabi

My Place

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what makes my world silent is
the same scent of yours
your words having inspired me

no matter how miserable we have ended up
the scene of the winter in those days is still my treasure

we can't see each other anymore
because we had someone else know the way we were
how sad it is

camellias fall off to the ground
with the way they look
determinedly
I wish I could be like them

bleeding
I try to stop it rolling on the skin by licking
it is my love for you that I love myself

Yes
it is love where I can especially unload my difficulty

to be recognized
to be known
my way, my love
the way I have been

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rachel Butler 18 July 2015

As a true lovers lamenting. Good work.

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Elena Sandu 28 October 2012

it is my love for you that I love myself How beautiful this poem! Even if is giving great pain his love is precious!

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Hans Vr 26 October 2012

A good poem, a very interesting read Wabi.

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