My Poem Poem by john tiong chunghoo

My Poem



if my poem has lifted you up
makes you feel flitting away
like a butterfly, walk in a gait
faster, tighter and graceful like
a top model, likewise, it would
have made me bloom like the
most beautiful flower in the garden
petals, pistlls, luscious, colourful,
showering bliss

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vipins Puthooran 25 December 2011

Wow, amazing poem! ! ! Flitting like a butterfly to sip the elixir of nectarell flowers! ! ! !

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john tiong chunghoo

john tiong chunghoo

Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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