My Poor Husbands! Poem by negar shahnouri
My Poor Husbands!
you betrayed our love once or twice but
don't worry i'm not so loyal too! ! !
i betray you when i study for a difficult exam or before i sleep, in my dreams! !
yeah in my dreams i live with many men! they are my classmates or tamer hosny, even persons i dont know, , all my husbands! ! ! ! ! ! !
you see i am not an innocent girl
are you mad at me? do you want to leave me now?
ok. bye
but wait, , , ,
you know my husbands always die in the middle of my dreams
and, ,
and i find myself in the airport with a ticket to your home!
you see, , ,
i love you even when i wanna be a betraytor!
thoughts weird...but fascinatingly original...honesty of the youth...and honesty of the inner mind...in open conflict good imaginative write, Negar...Why not, a ten?
Everyone has rights to dream, it is not betrayal, you speak by all's tongue. Beautiful writing.
An interesting poem....A bitter truth wrapped in dreams and poetic fantacy, which many men do'nt understand......10/10.
Negar/P.I....This piece is off-the-charts innovative, and most entertaining. Your left-halve neuro dominance was in full throttle, for sure...when you inked this pen-gem! FjR
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/29/2024 4:44:48 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Very nice, beautiful idea indeed. Lovely write with a mix of humour and a tinge of bitterness. And the twist in the end is superb.......