My Psychosis

Rating: 4.8

Slowly and without trace
You imprinted yourself upon my senses
left me reeling
coiling around me, choking out apathy
demanding more than I thought I had
unknown feelings
needful desires upon my mind
dangerous emotions jostling for space
taking me to the very edge
of insanity
Laughing at the wind,
thought patterns laced with sherbet
pushing and arguing
until
nothing.
Wake me up at visiting hour.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 01 May 2005

Not a bad poem at all. But what does Pscychosis (sic) mean? H

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Tallie Kane 01 May 2005

Ooh very nice use of emotives there, I especially love the last line and the structure of the poem, really put across the whole motive of the poem. Keep writing, Tallie x

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