My Rap Poem by crystal lambert

My Rap

Rating: 3.5


I wish I could describe this feeling,
The relief of my heart healing,
I said I would move on,
‘Cause you’re just a con.

Thought it would take forever,
But you’re not so clever,
‘Cause I’m already over it,
I know you’re full of shhh...

I’ve found someone good for my heart,
Someone who won’t rip it part by part,
So yeah I’ve never been better cheers,
Even though you made me fight my biggest fears.

I actually can’t stop smiling,
‘cause I can’t hear you’re whining.
You ruin a friendship between me and my friend,
But now that you’re gone it’s on the mend.

So don’t go around thinking your all great,
‘Cause you’re just a loser, innit mate!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kristy Artmann 14 November 2007

great poem! I agree with phoenix-it doesn't deserve a one at all....

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Phoenix Rory 12 November 2007

I don't think this poem deserves a one! I'm giving it a ten to balance out who ever was being mean!

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