Anew Maheswari

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My Saviour - Poem by Anew Maheswari

MY SAVIOUR

Whenever I look back, my eyes fill with tears
I get fear, when I don’t find you near……….
You were the one, on whose shoulder I use to lean & Shade my tears
You were the one, with whom I use to enjoy till stomach aching laugh.
Life was heaven, with your companion
It became hell, when you went.

The day you died is the day you took our smile with you…
I realized how lonely we are here without you...
People around us are just for sake…
They show the cares which are all fake
I truly miss your custody….
I truly miss your custody….

You left for heavenly abode on 15th august,2009.
See the creation of fate; you were taken away from this world on the day you took birth.
The day you got buried, It was like our world got buried..
I still feel the touch of your last day & promises I made..
I promise to be brave & keep our family save.

Among the crowd of million faces,
Your memories are floating into pieces
I miss every moment with you of my childhood
How entire life you struggle for our livelihood.
I miss you, I’m goanna miss you

World see my fake smile, but no one feels the pain deep inside my heart…..
The only one who use to feel it, left me without uttering a single word
Life goes on; my body is also going on with it
But my soul still search for you…..
My eyes turns hazy, remembering the day with you we shared crazy
I don’t know when we will reunite,
But I’m goanna miss you all infinite
I miss you, I’m goanna miss you

Someday when I’ll close my eyes…
This world will be beyond my sight;
Nothing to lose, you’re all in my heart
Here we got the most beautiful part (Father & Daughter)
And next birth we goanna rock the same part……..

I miss you all through my life…
I’m goanna miss you all through my life….

Love you papa

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

I wrote this poem, in the memory of my dad, who is no more alive!

Comments about My Saviour by Anew Maheswari

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (11/29/2015 8:22:00 AM)


    The day you died is the day you took our smile with you…
    I realized how lonely we are here without you...
    The day you got buried, It was like our world got buried..
    Nothing to lose, you’re all in my heart


    i liked all these lines in your poem. sooo expressive of your sadness about beloved Father's death. you express also that he is in your heart. you have not lost him really. in memories sweet he lives in you until you reach him in the other world where angels and saints live in the world of the Almighty. very nice poem. i liked it very much. tony
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    Anew Maheswari Anew Maheswari (12/2/2015 3:06:00 AM)

    Nothing to lose, memories are always alive ! Thank You Tony

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  • B.m. Biswas (11/27/2015 12:48:00 AM)


    the very thought and the memory give you pleasure....now we can realise how pleasurous it is to us who have fathersor parents by thr grace of god.......a brautiful homage........be godwith you......thanks forsharing anita... (Report) Reply

    Anew Maheswari Anew Maheswari (12/2/2015 3:07:00 AM)

    Lucky are the one who have parents! & Luckiest are the one, who have precious memory with them!

  • Kelly Kurt (11/26/2015 4:11:00 PM)


    The death of a parent is a painful event. Beautiful sentiments, Anita. Thanks (Report) Reply

    Anew Maheswari Anew Maheswari (12/2/2015 3:08:00 AM)

    Thank you kelly

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 26, 2015

Poem Edited: Thursday, December 3, 2015


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