My Sentiments Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

My Sentiments

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My sentiments
Thursday,27th September 2018

It is in me real
an individual
thinking free
and look at the tree

what a magnificent show 
and in a style to grow
enough fruits on the body, yet no burden
why keep such concern?

so no fears in the mind
or intend to keep of such kinds
it is a sign of the weak body 
and wracks feeble mind already

my sentiments are my sentiments
I need to present
in true form with feelings
then I shall be called true human being

why should I die internally?
when the spirit is high to present instantly 
I can prove it to any extent 
and the feelings can be sent anywhere

Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta

My Sentiments
Thursday, September 27, 2018
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 October 2018

And the feelings can be sent anywhere, really good, Hasmukh Sir. Yashvi Porwal, Pune, Sep 30,2018

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 September 2018

Very nice Hasmukh ji! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Mainak Chatterjee, Chennai, Sep 29,2018

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 September 2018

why should I die internally? when the spirit is high to present instantly  I can prove it to any extent  and the feelings can be sent anywhere Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta

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