My Spilled Cup Of Tea Poem by Juneil Sechico

My Spilled Cup Of Tea

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Dumb of heart of mine missed the blow,
Summer days are frozen by my tongue of snow,
The clock ticks away the chance;
The music played, I refused to dance.
Sun shone over my head;
I covered it with cloud; salty rain shed,
The river of glory is dead and dry;
Funny clown forgot how to smile.
You served me somethin' to eat, I pretended full,
Deafened ears of mine heard nothin' when you call.

Here I am with gloomy day;
Wishin the cruel wind will be kind to blow you back to me,
Blamin'on wine, Soaking in the sea;
How fool I was to spill my cup of tea.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Great rhythm and rhyme Juneil. Terrific imagery too! love Karin oops! I mean Granny

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Fay Slimm 10 December 2008

'Sun shone over my head' - 'Salty rains shed' - these are both good reflections from a good poetic mind. I like your title too - - it puts a question mark in the reader's mind, and gives food for thought.....keep writing.... best wishes from Fay.

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Juneil Sechico

Juneil Sechico

Bayabas, Cagayan de Oro City
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