....Rainbow.... Poem by Juneil Sechico

....Rainbow....

Rating: 4.7


As the ruby roses blossom
In the inner field of my bosom,
Allow my potpourri of best wishes
Perfume you with celestial bliss;
Let the rainbow of joy arch on your face.

As the orange sun generously shining
To give you the brightest morning,
Hear the birds that I sent you to sing
My simplest and ordinary greeting
With prayers for more blessings.

Celebrate like a xanthous butterfly
Dancing with breath of boundless sky
As you blow the candles on the cake
Chocolate moist from heaven sweetly baked;
Garnished with colors of gladness on God's plate.

Emerald field of grasses kissed by the sun
Reminds me of you as your life expands
Growing up and working with effective hands.
I'm wishing you to enlarge your territory,
Stretch up your hands to reach the star of victory.

Sapphire ocean of life is getting more deep;
Inviting you to take an exciting dip
Just to have more zestful life to live.
As the countless waves bless the shore,
I'm praying for you to be happy more.

My pen keep jotting with indigo ink,
I close my eyes, come to my mind and think
Of seeing you with your angelic face
Filled with sweetness of heaven's kiss,
Bathing in the pool of timeless happiness.

May the purple cloud of God's bounty
Shower you with more days of felicity.
Oh Sherlyn, to the world show your cream,
Scintillate with the lit of your heart's flame,
Soon you will live with your glittering dream.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shashendra Amalshan 11 May 2009

'Rose- WestLife Some say love it is a river that drowns the tender reed Some say love it is a razor that leaves your soul to bleed Some say love it is a hunger an endless aching need I say love it is a flower and you it's only seed It's the heart afraid of breaking that never learns to dance It's the dream afraid of waking that never takes the chance It's the one who won't be taken who cannot seem to give and the soul afraid of dying that never learns to live' hey well expressd...nature is something you always love..fills you with feelings of love..10++

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Bob Blackwell 11 May 2009

A lovely nature poem.

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Subroto Chatterjee 11 May 2009

Ah, a colt let loose in the art of love! Without assumptions, from the three persons photographed (given in your bio) which one is you? Second, ah..to be young AND in love..! Yes, pursue your dreams AND become better than the best ..(of poets) ! ! Cheers. Subroto

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Ackroy Lashley 11 May 2009

Your combination of love and nature express your passion for the art.

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Ency Bearis 13 May 2009

Abounding in colors write.......brilliant verses....

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Miriam Maia Padua 18 July 2009

a 10+++ for you.. for this very melodious write... and unique thoughts...different colors... very inspiring.. lovelots, maia

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inner field of my bosom, such a melody! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Fay Slimm 25 June 2009

What a find and how did I miss this one - it is a melody of colour, imagery and lovely words..... an inspired write..... it has to be one of your best....10 + ++ Fay

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Ashraful Musaddeq 17 May 2009

Beautifully written with nice imagery. Love.

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Catrina Heart 13 May 2009

you always penned with nice rhyme scheme Juniel..fabulous poem......10

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Juneil Sechico

Juneil Sechico

Bayabas, Cagayan de Oro City
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