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Camaraderie

Rating: 4.9

We can make history,
Explore the world beyond boundary,
We can soar the unlimited sky;
Spread our wings and fly.

Different interests, yet aiming for one;
Glow like silver brighter than the sun,
Mark the time with blazing hearts,
Help the ruins to make a brand new start.

Social insect is like what we are;
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 04 February 2009

great advocate write..nice rhymes and delivering the message of peace and unity..10

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Indira Babbellapati 27 January 2009

hope it would be a reality one day!

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Brianna Wilshusen 23 January 2009

I love the peace not war theme. It is very lovely, it gives a sense of freedom with the 'soar the unlimited sky' and freedom is grand.

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Brianna Wilshusen 23 January 2009

I love the peace not war theme. It is very lovely, it gives a sense of freedom with the 'soar the unlimited sky' and freedom is grand.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 21 January 2009

The message was very clear.........make love not war!

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Carl Harris 20 January 2009

It's always a pleasure to read an upbeat and optimistic poem, Juneil. You express many fine ideals in this poem and your words evoke some superb imagery as well. I am left wondering, however, whether this is a free verse poem or a rhyming poem, like a quatrain, which is the form you apparently used. The problem is compounded by that fact that some lines indeed do rhyme while others do not. Your poem is expressive, which I like quite a bit. If you wish to write in certain poetic forms, however, I would suggest you find a guidebook in a good bookstore and read of their requirements and practice them. I am confident you will master them in a short time and produce some very good poems. Carl.

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Fay Slimm 20 January 2009

Wonderfully rousing and electric in it's flow - - - I love it and am sure this will be well received - - - it has style and well thought out material....... more than 10 if I could - - - from Fay.....

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