..Thanks To You.. Poem by Juneil Sechico

..Thanks To You..

Rating: 4.8


Your pensive pen that is filled with honeyed thoughts,
Inks in my bossom with nectarous qoute;
Your marmalade of love flavors my heart;
Your luscious words blossom in my ardour's pot.

Your scarlet rose of cordiality,
Perfumes ev'ry morning of my day;
Heaven-scented juice from sapphire sky,
Showers my soul, blazes my very eyes,
Ev'ry time you wave your sweetest hi.

Your verdant pasture of solicitude,
Kissed by the xanthous sun of beatitude;
Emblazons my sight with ardency,
To see the pinnacle of heyday,
With a rainbow of celestial bliss,
Flamboyantly drawn on welkin's face.

Your candied grin of encouragement,
Became my character's ornament,
With blithesome colors from the firmanent,
Of burning tons of inspiration,
Fuels me to reach my aspirations,
Intensifies my motivation,
To touch the countenance of my ambition.

Thank you for the beauteous things you've taught,
For the barrels of sweetness you've brought;
Made me ready to face the world,
Fearless, confident, positive and bold,
To do the things they think I can't do,
To cease them from throwing their flaks of boo.
What I am now, I owe to you;
With all my heart, I thank you...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

truly beautiful, this poem is.

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Barry A. Lanier 18 April 2009

Yes the passion of the poem and the range of personifcation is impressive yet always remember that to much honey can make one sick....again..loving the intensity and the character of your love...bravo...

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 18 April 2009

A tender rendition of Passion and gratitude - a good combination as we form and become the pople we are... good write Juneil

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Naidz Ladia 20 April 2009

nice words of thanks...a very smart piece.. naizz

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Ency Bearis 20 April 2009

A very nice expressive write to show your gratitute to somebody and used all the ' flowering words ' to entice as such. It's very good but sometimes you had to curtail some of it, as if its too much make up of a face and as if your hiding something. The sincerity of it is gone. Anyways you did a great job of this poem. And Karin and Barry are right..use some of them in your next masterpiece...

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Celina Zavala 11 August 2009

all i can say is at a scale 1-10 this poem was a 13! lol its really nice keep up the good work im hopein to read more from u -celina

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Ashraful Musaddeq 08 May 2009

Thank you too for sharing this,10+

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Sheilla San Diego 01 May 2009

Wow! whoever this poem was dedicated to, must have been so elated, with your gratitude...in beautiful, profound words. great poem

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 29 April 2009

great words..so expressive and genuine..marvelous poem

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Naidz Ladia 27 April 2009

a nice words expressing thanks...i lav this.. naizz

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Juneil Sechico

Juneil Sechico

Bayabas, Cagayan de Oro City
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