Saturday, February 10, 2018

My Tears Comments

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My tears have fallen for them
Their tears have fallen for each other
They pool together, forming an ocean
A reflective glass of never forgotten memories
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ScarlettRose Patterson
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Jazib Kamalvi 07 February 2019

A nice poem, Scarlett Rose. Read my poem Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Susan Williams 20 October 2018

There could be several ways to read this- but I am seeing the immigrants fleeing from cruelty and poverty, trying to find a better life for their children. Excellent piece. 10

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Kim Barney 21 February 2019

I think your interpretation might be right, Susan. What about it, ScarlettRose?

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