Sunday, December 10, 2017

My Town Comments

Rating: 5.0

Huge juggernauts of oil ships
Cast garish lights over a black sea

The map of my city has changed
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Sheena Blackhall
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George Krokos 10 December 2017

The style really isn't much different than prose with a few line breaks. In the following lines it sounds as if you and those who are with you are just causing more pollution: - We launch bottles stuffed with wishes Hoping they'll come to land in the Central Belt -...........hmmm I wonder

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 December 2017

A beautiful write that vividly describes the town and its tormenting sight. It is commendable that its citizens are making efforts for its welfare....10

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