I invited him to go to war
And come into my trenches
To be pressed against a cold, brick wall
To endure my strokes and clenches
My dress fell to the floor
Like a gauntlet
Even my flaws
Love to be flaunted
beauty is not perfection, it is a perfect combination of flaws. this one really struck a chord, Lea
i love the wordplay between 'flaws' and 'flaunted'. another beaut, Lea! Jake
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Like the gauntlet/flaunted rhyme and the almost brutal imagery. I give you a ten for this war. -chuck